I see several potential issues with this so to clarify:

"(1) Discussion within a government institution that leads to a motion or a decision by that institution into taking deliberate action or inaction is to be considered substantive discussion."

and:

"a. For a Cabinet term, discussions from the Cabinet and all ministries shall be released no later than 6 months after the completion of that term."

Does this mean Discord discussions as well? I mean each ministry has Discords with substantial conversations. Does this cover that and if so in what form? For example, FA discussions sometimes a year long over treaties or relations - is that covered? Those will be interesting to document forum side. 

Who is responsible after 6 months to release the conversations? For example, does the current cabinet choose or ask former cabinet members for approval?

Should there be a clause that items of conversation especially those of a personal nature (vacations, etc) that often occur on Discord within more substantive discussions should be removed de facto? 

We have been all over the place with actually following the Sunshine laws so simple but clear would help here. As well as maybe an example as this hasn't been done in practice for a while.