So, generally the SC forum seems fond of the draft, and nobody noticed any rule violations.

Two smaller issues that came up: First, "mentorship", while having precedence in SC use, almost comes across as a Commendation written for an individual (which is OOCly correct) rather than for a nation (which is ICly correct and the viewpoint from which WA resolutions generally must be written). Second, mentioning the forum can be done more "IC flowery"; generally, I'll be reviewing the draft for other places where that can be done reasonably.

A larger "issue", or theme, is that Tsu's work is TSP only. This isn't a showstopper by any means, and there is precedent (including TSP's very own Fudgetopia) of nations Commended for single-region work. Still, the feeling seems to be that either the proposal should double down and explain how Tsu's dedication and loyalty to TSP should be an inspiration to fellow member states of the World Assembly, or to tie Tsu's work in TSP into a holistic picture across the NationStates landscape. I'm not quite sure yet how to tackle this one, or if I want to disregard this entirely.

I'll write an updated draft in the coming days.