You fix the plural in the Legion of Honor Act Article 3 but miss the apostrophe that’s needed in “predecessor’s”

The last line of Article 1 should match in part of speech (“military, civil, or politically”). Article 2 (1)c has an unnecessary capitalization (“...Awarded for Civil service, political service”). Article 5 should probably be “the time from nomination to presentation” instead of “for nomination to presentation”.

I’d argue that Article 3 (“sitting delegate”) makes more sense as “The sitting delegate” than as “sitting delegates”, as there can only be one sitting delegate at a time. The use of “their” in the clause is clearly singular— “their predecessor” would not make sense if it were referring to multiple delegates.