(10-11-2015, 02:49 PM)rhinotaz Wrote:

(10-11-2015, 02:36 PM)Hammerstar Wrote: In short, I'm a storyteller, and the things that I wrote exist solely in creating a good story.

A good story needs conflict and cohesion, both of which your "stories" sometimes lack.

If you are a storyteller in this instance, I like to think of myself as a proofreader (which I actually am).

Conflict? The haze is a conflict. My governor being tried for something she didn't commit is a conflict. Hammerstar trying to explore space is a conflict. The Pendragon Education fund (Which coincidentally was my grandfather's wish as well, of me educating people), is a conflict. The Seed bank is a conflict, Project West is a conflict. All of those qualify as a conflict, they are problems that would spark into a story.

Or how about times when there are no conflicts, how about the time when I wrote something about the Ramadhan celebration? What's the conflict in that? Or how about Basil Day, what's the conflict in that?

Just feeling that this is no longer fun making it elaborate anymore.