(OOC: For clarity, if and when a motion and second are made for both, I plan on bringing the GI-Landian proposal and the Esfalsan suggested changes to vote simultaneously. ICly, the GI-Landian suggestions will be voted on first, and then the Esfalsan changes, which were framed as an amendment to the GI-Landian proposal, so they would only be applicable if the GI-Landian amendments pass first. There is no established procedure for this as best as I can tell, so I'm open to suggestions about alternative procedures.)