Thanks sandaoguo, it looks very nice
May I suggesting adding a clause in the resolution along the lines of:
Option A Wrote:3. Affirms that citizens of the Coalition shall not be discriminated against for their views on the military principles in this resolution.
I know it isn't necessary, but I think it would be good to formally state that military philosophy is not a reason to turn people away from the region or to treat them differently. It is more a statement affirming our welcoming nature.
I am not sure if this suggestion of mine would need something of a disclaimer for military membership itself (I will leave that to the more military-minded people to discuss); such as this:
Option B Wrote:3. Affirms that citizens of the Coalition shall not be discriminated against for their views on the military principles in this resolution, except in regards to their position within the South Pacific Special Forces.
I am happy with either of the options I provided.
Anyway, just a suggestion to make this nicely worded resolution even better
Former Associate Justice of the High Court of the South Pacific (4 December 2019 to 5 February 2021)