(07-21-2020, 03:02 PM)Roavin Wrote: ugh I was going to reply in detail how much I hate this as written but forgot to do so. so here's the TL;DR:
- Definition 1 is bananas, because we can just call them "officials of the Coalition" in line with other laws.
- Definition 1 is double bananas because as stated it doesn't include peeps like LegComm or the SPSF Generals or even the Court, which is massively problematic for hopefully obvious reasons.
- Definition 2 "preformed". hah. Ironic typo.
- Why does definition 2 restrict reporting to a person in power? What about reporting to the assembly? What about reporting about person in power, which is really what this bill should be about?
- We tend to use "individual" rather than "person" in laws
- 2.4 is redundant. Because, uh, ... obviously if you do something illegal, it goes before the Court.
- .... other things ...
Might whip up a draft later.
If I didn't know you any better, I'd think you were waiting for someone to second the vote
and then bring forth this ground breaking evidence.
(07-21-2020, 03:06 PM)North Prarie Wrote: Oh, well, here's the opposition. That worked well.
I'll motion to cancel the vote. I'll re-motion once the Assembly is in agreement with everything (if they will be)
Seconded.
I'm 0-2 in seconding things now
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