Southern Journal: Issue II |
My opinion, both are fantastic, but Kringle's is a bit better for the public eye.(No quoting me)
Shall we edit my musings?
I don't really want to edit Musings. They have to be the words of the author. I can however suggest the following structure:
First Paragraph: explaining what you want to discuss in your Musings. Second Paragraph: discuss the success of the Regional Games, both in terms of participation and in the creation of friendships. Third Paragraph: discuss how this encouraged MoRA to plan more festivals, and how we are confident that this will in turn improve our activity levels and help strengthen friendships abroad. Of course, the exact contents are up to you, but that's the basic structure I would use. Prerefably have 3-4 lines per paragraph. Hope this helps! Former Delegate of the South Pacific
Posts outside High Court venues should be taken as those of any other legislator. I do not participate in the regional server, but I am happy to talk through instant messaging or on the forum. Legal Resources: THE MATT-DUCK Law Archive | Mavenu Diplomatic Archive | Rules of the High Court | Case Submission System | Online Rulings Consultation System (10-07-2014, 05:37 PM)Kris Kringle Wrote: How does this look? Looks much better.
Awesome then. It's still your article, so you will obviously be credited for it.
Now we only need Henn's Musings. Former Delegate of the South Pacific
Posts outside High Court venues should be taken as those of any other legislator. I do not participate in the regional server, but I am happy to talk through instant messaging or on the forum. Legal Resources: THE MATT-DUCK Law Archive | Mavenu Diplomatic Archive | Rules of the High Court | Case Submission System | Online Rulings Consultation System
It seems we won't have Musings for this issue. I'm going to go ahead and publish it just as it is.
Former Delegate of the South Pacific
Posts outside High Court venues should be taken as those of any other legislator. I do not participate in the regional server, but I am happy to talk through instant messaging or on the forum. Legal Resources: THE MATT-DUCK Law Archive | Mavenu Diplomatic Archive | Rules of the High Court | Case Submission System | Online Rulings Consultation System
Random Musings is the place where guest writers can make a reflection on important events from across NationStates. Today, I want to reflect on The SPRG, and on the future of it and other projects.
The South Pacific Regional Games were hugely successful. We had over 20 people participate in 3 teams, Rose, Orchid, and Chrysanthemum, in 3 different challenges. But the success of an event that brings people together isn't just in the amount you people you have. It's also in the creation of friendships by bringing those people together. When looking at the special forums we have set up, I noticed that the people were working diligently together to solve the challenges. It truly is amazing at the level of cooperation. This event was encouraging for the MoRA, and because of the immense success of this event, we are planning for several more monthly events, each one different and hopefully a little better than the last. I also hope hat this will strengthen our inter-regional friendships among the GCRs and UCRs too. The next planned event for the month of October is the Hunger Games.
I have already published the issue.
Former Delegate of the South Pacific
Posts outside High Court venues should be taken as those of any other legislator. I do not participate in the regional server, but I am happy to talk through instant messaging or on the forum. Legal Resources: THE MATT-DUCK Law Archive | Mavenu Diplomatic Archive | Rules of the High Court | Case Submission System | Online Rulings Consultation System |
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