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[NOTICE] Typographical, Grammatical, & Formatting Errors in Legislation - Amerion - 11-30-2018

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(4) The Chair may correct typographical errors, grammatical errors, or formatting inconsistencies at any time, as long as these corrections do not alter the original intent of the law, following a three day period in which the corrections are presented to the assembly for comments. Any such corrections must be recorded with the legislative history of each law.
Legislative Procedure Act, Article 2, Section 4 [Image: rxtQsR3.png]

ABOUT THIS

This thread, appropriately titled 'Typographical, Grammatical, & Formatting Errors in Legislation', shall be used as a singular point of notice for every correction henceforth.

Over the course of the next seventy-three weeks, the Chair, with assistance from the 'Stools' (Deputy Chairs), shall examine each piece of legislation in the MATT-DUCK Law Archive.

A minimum of one notice will be published every week. Each notice will deal with one particular law. Afterwards, there will be a consultation period of three days in which Legislators will have an opportunity to scrutinise the proposed corrections before they take effect.

NOTICES

CODENOTICE RELATING TODATERESULT
TGF.01
29 November — 2 December
Corrected
TGF.02
30 November — 3 December
Corrected
TGF.03
9 — 12 December
In progress



RE: [NOTICE] Typographical, Grammatical, & Formatting Errors in Legislation - Amerion - 11-30-2018

TGF.01

This correction was originally published here. It has been reproduced in this thread for record-keeping purposes. Please note that the three day consultation period is based on the original thread.

INFORMATION:

Legislation: Elections Act
Article and Section number (if applicable): Article 2, Section 3

ORIGINAL TEXT:


(3) Voters will have the option to cast their privately vote using a secret ballot. The method of private voting will be selected by the Election Commission. The method must utilize an unaffiliated account or server, with the method and all votes remaining available for audit. Named ballots are not to be released under any circumstances.


AMENDED TEXT:


(3) Voters will have the option to cast their privately vote using a secret ballot. The method of private voting will be selected by the Election Commission. The method must utilize an unaffiliated account or server, with the method and all votes remaining available for audit. Named ballots are not to be released under any circumstances.




RE: [NOTICE] Typographical, Grammatical, & Formatting Errors in Legislation - Amerion - 11-30-2018

This is original text of the proposed corrections. It has since undergone revision based on the feedback received. The current proposal is available here.

TGF.02

INFORMATION:

Legislation: Criminal Code
Article and Section number (if applicable): N/A (Multiple amendments)

ORIGINAL TEXT:



AMENDED TEXT:



ADDITIONAL AMENDMENT:


The code for the original text relies heavily on the colour tag for #333333. This tag is used in every line of code. I propose that this colour tag be stricken from the post.





RE: [NOTICE] Typographical, Grammatical, & Formatting Errors in Legislation - Nakari - 11-30-2018

[Reason: The High Court capitalises 'article' (see: HCCC1801HCRR1803, and HCLQ1804). For consistency purposes, 'article' will be capitalised in all legislation] 

The High Court only capitalises article when it's being used as a proper noun. Here, it isn't being used as a proper noun, and so non-capitalisation would be more appropriate.

[Reason: For consistency, the word(s) should be changed to American English.]

This injures me Sad

As for "The South Pacific" vs. "the South Pacific" - I personally think this should be changed to the non-capitalized version to fit present common usage and accuracy to the in-game region. The Charter does have "The South Pacific" but the Charter is not immune to change either.


RE: [NOTICE] Typographical, Grammatical, & Formatting Errors in Legislation - Belschaft - 11-30-2018

I join my fellow Londoner in expressing opposition to the suggestion of replacing English with “American” in our laws.

Article 2, Clause 4 only empowers the Chair to make corrections - as this would be introducing an error into our laws, this proposal is clearly illegal.

Should the Chair insist on going forward with this illegal act I will have no choice but to introduce legislation to create the “Standard English (United Kingdom Standard English [UKSE] Grammar and Vocabulary) Act”, otherwise known as the “English, Motherfucker” act.


RE: [NOTICE] Typographical, Grammatical, & Formatting Errors in Legislation - Ryccia - 11-30-2018

It is my duty to object to the proposal of the British imperialists. Proper English is spoken by ~225 million as a first tounge, and by ~250.6 million overall, easily and resolutely making up a majority of all Anglophones, native or not. It is, therefore, the duty of the Chair to be correct on grammar, not to be an archaic and elitist editor of our laws.


RE: [NOTICE] Typographical, Grammatical, & Formatting Errors in Legislation - Awe - 11-30-2018

在我看来,我们律政行政的官方通用语言应是中文。因毕竟中文是世界使用人口最多的语言,相信议长颁布《律政中文使用令》,必将使行政施法方面更加便捷。

In my opinion, the official language used in legislation and administration should be Chinese, seeing as it has the most number of speakers worldwide. I believe that if the Chair were to issue an "Order on the Use of Chinese in Legislation and Administration" it will make the administration and interpretation of laws more efficient.


RE: [NOTICE] Typographical, Grammatical, & Formatting Errors in Legislation - Imperial Frost Federation - 11-30-2018

Seeing as the current super power and hegemon of the Global Order is the United States of America I support our Chairs decision to fall in line with the global hegemon and change the language to American English.


[NOTICE] Typographical, Grammatical, & Formatting Errors in Legislation - Kris Kringle - 11-30-2018

Let it be known that I prefer British English.


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RE: [NOTICE] Typographical, Grammatical, & Formatting Errors in Legislation - Ryccia - 11-30-2018

(11-30-2018, 05:01 PM)Awe Wrote: 在我看来,我们律政行政的官方通用语言应是中文。因毕竟中文是世界使用人口最多的语言,相信议长颁布《律政中文使用令》,必将使行政施法方面更加便捷。

In my opinion, the official language used in legislation and administration should be Chinese, seeing as it has the most number of speakers worldwide. I believe that if the Chair were to issue an "Order on the Use of Chinese in Legislation and Administrative" it will make the administration and interpretation of laws more efficient.

Cut the ~1.something billion of Chinese who cannot access NS without feeling safe, and you have a scattered few tens of millions.