Yes, I fully agree—our platform needs significant revision. I personally would support a complete rewrite of that as well.

In the meantime, I'd like to propose the following amendments to Griffindor's charter proposal.

Quote:Article IV- Branches of the Alliance for the Preservation of the Coalition
1. The APC has two branches of its party, the forum side APC, and the game side APC.
2. The forum side APC is governed by the APCRC.
3. The game side APC is governed by the chair and vice chair of the APC, as well as any game side regional officers who are members of the APC.
4. The game side and forum side branches shall coexist and cooperate for the advancement of the beliefs laid out in the Platform.

Quote:Article VII- Membership Requirements and Guidelines
1. To be a member of the forum side APC, the only requirement is legislator status and a pledge to provide all reasonable commitment to the APC.
2. To be a member of the game side APC, you must have a nation in TSP, or you must be a forum side member of the APC, and a pledge to provide all reasonable commitment to the APC.
3. Applying to become a member must be done at http://tspforums.xyz/thread-4030.html for forum side membership and via telegram to the Chair, Vice Chair, or head of recruitment, for the game side.
A: The full contents of such a telegram shall be added to a in-game dispatch maintained jointly by the Chair and Vice Chair.
B: Full disclosure on the required procedure for such an application for game side membership, as well as a notice that such an application telegram will be made public via dispatch, shall be made on a dispatch, whether the same aforementioned dispatch or another, also jointly maintained by the Chair and the Vice Chair.
C: If and when the Chair and/or Vice Chair changes, the new Chair and Vice Chair shall jointly manage the creation of and transfer of all previous data to a new dispatch, if deemed necessary. 
4. Applications to join the party may not be denied unless an applicant has not fulfilled the requirements, or the APCRC believes you are joining the party in bad faith.

Yeah, the second amendment is wordy as heck.