Drall most of that looks good, but

" build the ever weakening bridges between gameside and forumside"

If you look at the RMB\gameside from 2013 to now we've actually progressively gotten so much better as a region at activity on the gameside. If anything I would phrase that as "continue to build the strong foundations laid out between the gameside and forumside by organizations like the Local Council and the regular governmental communications through TGs, dispatches, and RMB posts."

Hoping Griff catches the rest or I will look at it again. Also , Spenty do you have a stance on the RA split? Maybe write the draft again with your position and we can edit so this can go to vote as a whole?