(05-07-2018, 09:06 AM)Roavin Wrote: I'm not quite getting what you're changing in the Legion of Honor Award Act Articles 3 and 5?
Other than that, looks good to me as well.
Article 3 I'm adding an 's' to delegate, since "delegate cannot award themselves" doesn't make much sense grammatically. Either it needs a definite article, which would make it singular and then the 'themselves' would be weird, or it can become plural.
Article 5 originally had "one months time" which should be "one month's time". I'm going to put these in lime green instead of normal green to make them more obvious, then.
(This post was last modified: 05-07-2018, 09:12 AM by Nakari.)
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