This is fairly straightforward and similar in language to our modern treaties with Lazarus and The Rejected Realms. I have no significant objections.

I will have to consult with Unibot, but I believe we would be able to hold a joint vote on repealing the old treaty and ratifying this new one. The threshold is 60% for both actions, so it shouldn't be impossible to hold a single vote to do both at the same time.