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[DRAFT] Commend Tsunamy
#11

Alright, a few changes:
- Added some light details on the 2013 and 2016 coups
- Merged a few things
- Minor wording changes here and there
- Expanded the positions

Do you think there should be more about journalism/SPIN?

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Believing that Tsunamy, a nation founded in the earliest days of the South Pacific, has gone beyond the call of duty in their phenomenal service to their home region,

Recalling Tsunamy's leading role in 2003 to save the newly formed Coalition of the South Pacific, in which a natural disaster enabled a coup d'etat by The Xyz Affair and the resulting dissolution of the Coalition's primogenital Delegate nation Killer Monkeys, by seeking foreign assistance through diplomacy, establishing a new regional forum, and salvaging the Coalition's Charter that had previously been stored in Killer Monkeys' jurisdiction,

Further recalling Tsunamy's subsequent roles in defeating coup d'etat attempts of the Coalition by Milograd in 2013, in which Tsunamy tirelessly engaged fellow nations to garner support, and by Hileville in 2016, in which Tsunamy was materially involved in negotiations and, following the failure of the attempt, was entrusted by the region to lead a special Cabinet overseeing a Great Council,

Impressed by the varied positions, both elected and appointed, that Tsunamy has held with distinction in the Coalition of the South Pacific, including Minister of Intelligence, Member of the Council for State Security, Member of the Council on Regional Security, Secretary of Foreign Affairs, Vice President, Special Advisor to the Cabinet, Chair of the Assembly, Editor-in-Chief of South Pacific Independent News and later the Pacific Independent News Network, and most notably the World Assembly Delegate, holding that position a total of three times for a combined 777 days,

Noting further that Tsunamy has played a key role in security, both of the Coalition itself as well as the nations contained therein, starting with their role as Minister of Intelligence in 2004 and continuing to this day as tenured member of the Council on Regional Security,

Affirming that Tsunamy has administered the regional forums of the Coalition for most of its existence (from 2003 to 2012 as well as from 2014 onwards),

Fascinated by Tsunamy's relentless drive for grassroots democratic involvement of all nations in the South Pacific, the fruits of which are seen most notably in the innovative Local Council, now a core component of South Pacifican democracy, which encourages and allows all nations in the South Pacific to contribute to their governance without requiring membership on the regional forums,

Deeply convinced that their mentorship to newer nations, their pragmatic approaches to problem-solving, and their conviction in reaching decisions through consensus, have significantly shaped South Pacifican culture in immeasurably positive ways,

Amazed that a nation with such an astounding record of service to their region has escaped recognition of this body for so long,

Hereby Commends Tsunamy.
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#12

Hereby
Benevolent Thomas-Today at 11:15 AM
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#13

Submitted a draft on the NS forums here.
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#14

Cool, cool, cool!
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#15

As great as this is, the timing is perhaps less than favorable.

Marius Rahl

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#16

Oh I don't plan to submit for quite some time.
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#17

Ah. Probably for the best.

Marius Rahl

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#18

I've gotten some very constructive comments on the SC forum so far. I'll wait a while before writing the next draft, which I'll post here for you all to see before I post it on the NS SC forum.

@Kris Kringle and @Belschaft, could you check to make sure I'm not inaccurate on anything, pretty please? <3
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#19

It looks accurate enough to me on a quick skim read, without checking all the events in question.

I do not believe that it is SC rules compliant though, in that you refer to the nation of Tsunamy holding offices like "Minister" that only an individual could hold.
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#20

There's actually precedent for that, so mods deem it legal. Still, I can probably think of ways to ICify that more. Maybe that Tsunamy was in charge of the Ministry?
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