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The next issue would be something more decent,
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Put a little effort everyday and it will stack up and create a foundation for you.
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(10-11-2015, 12:13 PM)Hammerstar Wrote: So the story was this
When I joined this thread I had my nation planned out, it was going to be inspired by the TV-show "Eureka" where people are incredible intelligent there. Which explains why many Hammerstarian ambassadors are quite versed in their academical majors. There was a law in Hammerstar, known as the Regula Rationalis, it states:
All citizens must complete the ten levels of education (Toddler, Pre-School, Kindergarten, Elementary (3 years), Middle (3 years), High (3 years), Bachelors (avg 5 years), Masters (avg 5 years), Doctorates ( avg 3 years) and Professorates (avg 3 years). Regardless of but not limited to: age, sex, financial history, culture, origin, physique, religion and sexual preference.
All citizens must have a fluent understanding and must be adept in at least 20 existing languages.
All citizens must earn at least 3 doctorates or 6 masters degree with high-honours academic standing. Citizens that reached a doctorate are obliged to have at least 6 months experience of teaching their preferred subject
All citizens must be adept in 3 types of the existing range of weaponries that has been used in the course of history.
In order to demonstrate their skill, as a final test, all citizens would have to spar with a randomly selected person at their class. The victor does not prove that he/she is the prove, rather, it is their skill that comes into question.
All citizens must learn the fundamental language of the country, namely Latium. There is no limit to its fluency, however a high calibre of fluency is recommended.
All citizens would be obliged to an education free of tuition and discrimination, those who commits discrimination shall be punished according to their respective educational institutes.
Enforcing that every single resident in the nation have the right to study free of charge, this includes books, stationary and learning materials.
Educational Institutes that fail to meet the standards shall be reviewed of their licensing and would not be allowed to recruit students and scholars wether its in the nation or abroad until they meet standards.
Companies are allowed to set up minimum education standards once reviewed and approved by the Government of Hammerstar
Hereby takes Clause 100, or Regula Rationalis, in motion.
I remembered posting this in the facts of my nation, and no one bats an eye. I thought it was acceptable, but when I posted this in my SCO accession thread, everyone lost their minds.
http://thesouthpacific.x10.mx/thread-2607.html
Almost every member scrutinised me due to this law, that's why i made a solo RP thread about the status of this law:
http://thesouthpacific.x10.mx/thread-2610.html
So, I came up with a better one. One that would get me out of the hook. I consulted with several people about it, and included their suggestions.
This is the new one
Clause 100, Protocol C
1.) Recognising the right for every citizen of Hammerstar to have a proper education, regardless of but not limited to: Gender, age, sexual preference, background, wealth, skin colour, cultural heritage, religion, health condition, bloodline and reputation.
2.) Enforcing that every resident in Hammerstar to take on the quest for knowledge, and is allowed to choose their own path of study.
3.) Effectuating that the residents of Hammerstar must complete at least secondary education until they are allowed to work.
3.a) Those who conduct work shall be thoroughly analysed of their bachelor diploma, and their understanding of the topic they have chosen. Failure of the governmental analysis would lead to the individual to complete a study refresher course. Refusing to rekindle their understanding of the topic they have devoted to would result in imprisonment for illegal employment
3.b) In special cases that the household could not support themselves (e.g: Unfortunate accidents, Financial loss, Death of a guardian, etc), The government of Hammerstar is obliged to help the citizens stand on their feet, and ensure that special steps be taken to provide them equal access to knowledge.
4.) Administering that every resident in Hammerstar is given full access on education with free of charge, paid by the government of Hammerstar. Learning materials such as books, shall be taken care for.
5.) Realising that some people would have a various financial difficulties in funding for their children's education, therefore, The government of Hammerstar shall provide all educational institutes with the state-of-the-art educational facilities with full funding from the government of Hammerstar, if the government deems that the educational institute has fulfilled certain criterions:
5.a) Meets the standards agreed in the annual education plans, in which educational standards are being placed in its highest stature
5.b) Produced various different researches and discoveries that are beneficial to the scientific advancements, welfare, and interests of Hammerstar
5.c) Has attained 98% total amount of graduates from the institute
5.d) Has attained 75% amount of high-honour academic standing graduates from the institute
5.e) Gives an opportunity for scholars to solve real life problems through internships and hands-on practices.
6.)Stating that Education shall henceforth be free of tuition and discrimination. Those who partake in discrimination shall be punished according to their respective educational institutes.
7.) Acknowledges the existence of disabled citizens, both mentally and physically, and ensures that special steps be taken to provide them equal access to knowledge.
8.) Acquiring all citizens to have a strong fluency and understand on the Latium, the national language of Hammerstar.
9.) Concedes to the fact that Hammerstar has various different cultures over the years, and that leaving them to rot is simply wasteful.
10.) Realising that the artistic values of Hammerstar has endured several threats that is known to have ended various different civilisations.
11.) Deeply concerns that the cultural heritages of Hammerstar are slowly coming to a point where it shall be evanescent.
12.) Holding the responsibility to completely embrace and conserve the cultural heritage of Hammerstar, therefore in the act of conservation, the government requires that all citizens practice at least one of the many traditional and cultural arts in Hammerstar.
13.) Admitting the fact that the art of combat has been a part of the cultural heritage in Hammerstar, its influence in history is simply ineffable.
14.) Professing that Hammerstar has a lagniappe in the art of combat, and that its effect to an individual is simply quintessential. Therefore the art of war and combat has, and always will be, a staple part of history.
15.) Therefore demanding that all citizens of Hammerstar to be adept at least one discipline of the martial arts, and choose at least one type of weaponry to master. Either it be a modern practice or a traditional practice.
16.) Elaborating that a test of proficiency shall be conducted in a decided battlefield/location where the disciple shall be rigorously examined by their educators and a couple of grandmasters through a series of criterions. A government official shall look over the grading process.
16.a) The government of Hammerstar implores that the final test shall be a test between two disciples of the art, which shall be paired up by the mentors overlooking the battle.
17.) Hereby takes clause 100, or the C protocol in motion.
Now Henn, Ryccia, Qvait and Farengeto are still cringing about it, but several other members have cried out stop, and accepted the fact that Hammerstar had actually renewed its law in favour of RP realism. Farengeto won't stop cringing about it, so I called him the following:
"Furthermore, to the delegate of Farangeto, it is my personal opinion that you have disrespected our sovereignty and have been unable to accept our ways of life, simply because that we are different. We have not yet known about your ways of life, we just got out from our isolation a couple months ago, we would not change our laws to stoop to your standards simply because that we are different. We truly hope monsieur delegate, that our relations shall be peaceful, no matter how different we are." He wasn't much help in solving this thing, and I, quite frankly, hated the very fact of him face palming and grouching instead of trying to help me out of this (Like some others).
Nevertheless, everyone accepted the fact that I actually took into consideration, the worries of other members. I quote Kris: "[…]for taking into consideration the opinion of this Council." Well that's the story, and I am currently the only nation in which their accession to the SCO took longer than anyone else.
TL;DR, you changed the law, basically making it the same but with different wording...?
(10-11-2015, 01:28 PM)rhinotaz Wrote: (10-11-2015, 12:13 PM)Hammerstar Wrote: So the story was this
When I joined this thread I had my nation planned out, it was going to be inspired by the TV-show "Eureka" where people are incredible intelligent there. Which explains why many Hammerstarian ambassadors are quite versed in their academical majors. There was a law in Hammerstar, known as the Regula Rationalis, it states:
All citizens must complete the ten levels of education (Toddler, Pre-School, Kindergarten, Elementary (3 years), Middle (3 years), High (3 years), Bachelors (avg 5 years), Masters (avg 5 years), Doctorates ( avg 3 years) and Professorates (avg 3 years). Regardless of but not limited to: age, sex, financial history, culture, origin, physique, religion and sexual preference.
All citizens must have a fluent understanding and must be adept in at least 20 existing languages.
All citizens must earn at least 3 doctorates or 6 masters degree with high-honours academic standing. Citizens that reached a doctorate are obliged to have at least 6 months experience of teaching their preferred subject
All citizens must be adept in 3 types of the existing range of weaponries that has been used in the course of history.
In order to demonstrate their skill, as a final test, all citizens would have to spar with a randomly selected person at their class. The victor does not prove that he/she is the prove, rather, it is their skill that comes into question.
All citizens must learn the fundamental language of the country, namely Latium. There is no limit to its fluency, however a high calibre of fluency is recommended.
All citizens would be obliged to an education free of tuition and discrimination, those who commits discrimination shall be punished according to their respective educational institutes.
Enforcing that every single resident in the nation have the right to study free of charge, this includes books, stationary and learning materials.
Educational Institutes that fail to meet the standards shall be reviewed of their licensing and would not be allowed to recruit students and scholars wether its in the nation or abroad until they meet standards.
Companies are allowed to set up minimum education standards once reviewed and approved by the Government of Hammerstar
Hereby takes Clause 100, or Regula Rationalis, in motion.
I remembered posting this in the facts of my nation, and no one bats an eye. I thought it was acceptable, but when I posted this in my SCO accession thread, everyone lost their minds.
http://thesouthpacific.x10.mx/thread-2607.html
Almost every member scrutinised me due to this law, that's why i made a solo RP thread about the status of this law:
http://thesouthpacific.x10.mx/thread-2610.html
So, I came up with a better one. One that would get me out of the hook. I consulted with several people about it, and included their suggestions.
This is the new one
Clause 100, Protocol C
1.) Recognising the right for every citizen of Hammerstar to have a proper education, regardless of but not limited to: Gender, age, sexual preference, background, wealth, skin colour, cultural heritage, religion, health condition, bloodline and reputation.
2.) Enforcing that every resident in Hammerstar to take on the quest for knowledge, and is allowed to choose their own path of study.
3.) Effectuating that the residents of Hammerstar must complete at least secondary education until they are allowed to work.
3.a) Those who conduct work shall be thoroughly analysed of their bachelor diploma, and their understanding of the topic they have chosen. Failure of the governmental analysis would lead to the individual to complete a study refresher course. Refusing to rekindle their understanding of the topic they have devoted to would result in imprisonment for illegal employment
3.b) In special cases that the household could not support themselves (e.g: Unfortunate accidents, Financial loss, Death of a guardian, etc), The government of Hammerstar is obliged to help the citizens stand on their feet, and ensure that special steps be taken to provide them equal access to knowledge.
4.) Administering that every resident in Hammerstar is given full access on education with free of charge, paid by the government of Hammerstar. Learning materials such as books, shall be taken care for.
5.) Realising that some people would have a various financial difficulties in funding for their children's education, therefore, The government of Hammerstar shall provide all educational institutes with the state-of-the-art educational facilities with full funding from the government of Hammerstar, if the government deems that the educational institute has fulfilled certain criterions:
5.a) Meets the standards agreed in the annual education plans, in which educational standards are being placed in its highest stature
5.b) Produced various different researches and discoveries that are beneficial to the scientific advancements, welfare, and interests of Hammerstar
5.c) Has attained 98% total amount of graduates from the institute
5.d) Has attained 75% amount of high-honour academic standing graduates from the institute
5.e) Gives an opportunity for scholars to solve real life problems through internships and hands-on practices.
6.)Stating that Education shall henceforth be free of tuition and discrimination. Those who partake in discrimination shall be punished according to their respective educational institutes.
7.) Acknowledges the existence of disabled citizens, both mentally and physically, and ensures that special steps be taken to provide them equal access to knowledge.
8.) Acquiring all citizens to have a strong fluency and understand on the Latium, the national language of Hammerstar.
9.) Concedes to the fact that Hammerstar has various different cultures over the years, and that leaving them to rot is simply wasteful.
10.) Realising that the artistic values of Hammerstar has endured several threats that is known to have ended various different civilisations.
11.) Deeply concerns that the cultural heritages of Hammerstar are slowly coming to a point where it shall be evanescent.
12.) Holding the responsibility to completely embrace and conserve the cultural heritage of Hammerstar, therefore in the act of conservation, the government requires that all citizens practice at least one of the many traditional and cultural arts in Hammerstar.
13.) Admitting the fact that the art of combat has been a part of the cultural heritage in Hammerstar, its influence in history is simply ineffable.
14.) Professing that Hammerstar has a lagniappe in the art of combat, and that its effect to an individual is simply quintessential. Therefore the art of war and combat has, and always will be, a staple part of history.
15.) Therefore demanding that all citizens of Hammerstar to be adept at least one discipline of the martial arts, and choose at least one type of weaponry to master. Either it be a modern practice or a traditional practice.
16.) Elaborating that a test of proficiency shall be conducted in a decided battlefield/location where the disciple shall be rigorously examined by their educators and a couple of grandmasters through a series of criterions. A government official shall look over the grading process.
16.a) The government of Hammerstar implores that the final test shall be a test between two disciples of the art, which shall be paired up by the mentors overlooking the battle.
17.) Hereby takes clause 100, or the C protocol in motion.
Now Henn, Ryccia, Qvait and Farengeto are still cringing about it, but several other members have cried out stop, and accepted the fact that Hammerstar had actually renewed its law in favour of RP realism. Farengeto won't stop cringing about it, so I called him the following:
"Furthermore, to the delegate of Farangeto, it is my personal opinion that you have disrespected our sovereignty and have been unable to accept our ways of life, simply because that we are different. We have not yet known about your ways of life, we just got out from our isolation a couple months ago, we would not change our laws to stoop to your standards simply because that we are different. We truly hope monsieur delegate, that our relations shall be peaceful, no matter how different we are." He wasn't much help in solving this thing, and I, quite frankly, hated the very fact of him face palming and grouching instead of trying to help me out of this (Like some others).
Nevertheless, everyone accepted the fact that I actually took into consideration, the worries of other members. I quote Kris: "[…]for taking into consideration the opinion of this Council." Well that's the story, and I am currently the only nation in which their accession to the SCO took longer than anyone else.
TL;DR, you changed the law, basically making it the same but with different wording...?
Look at it again, analyse it carefully.
"毎日の小さな努力の積み重ねが歴史を作っていくんだよ。"
Put a little effort everyday and it will stack up and create a foundation for you.
- Doraemon
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Treasure Island Awards Best Roleplayer 2020
Cocos Winner for Best Character Writer 2017
Cocos Winner for Best International Event 2017
Cocos Winner for Best Overall RP 2017
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(10-11-2015, 01:39 PM)Hammerstar Wrote: (10-11-2015, 01:28 PM)rhinotaz Wrote: (10-11-2015, 12:13 PM)Hammerstar Wrote: So the story was this
When I joined this thread I had my nation planned out, it was going to be inspired by the TV-show "Eureka" where people are incredible intelligent there. Which explains why many Hammerstarian ambassadors are quite versed in their academical majors. There was a law in Hammerstar, known as the Regula Rationalis, it states:
All citizens must complete the ten levels of education (Toddler, Pre-School, Kindergarten, Elementary (3 years), Middle (3 years), High (3 years), Bachelors (avg 5 years), Masters (avg 5 years), Doctorates ( avg 3 years) and Professorates (avg 3 years). Regardless of but not limited to: age, sex, financial history, culture, origin, physique, religion and sexual preference.
All citizens must have a fluent understanding and must be adept in at least 20 existing languages.
All citizens must earn at least 3 doctorates or 6 masters degree with high-honours academic standing. Citizens that reached a doctorate are obliged to have at least 6 months experience of teaching their preferred subject
All citizens must be adept in 3 types of the existing range of weaponries that has been used in the course of history.
In order to demonstrate their skill, as a final test, all citizens would have to spar with a randomly selected person at their class. The victor does not prove that he/she is the prove, rather, it is their skill that comes into question.
All citizens must learn the fundamental language of the country, namely Latium. There is no limit to its fluency, however a high calibre of fluency is recommended.
All citizens would be obliged to an education free of tuition and discrimination, those who commits discrimination shall be punished according to their respective educational institutes.
Enforcing that every single resident in the nation have the right to study free of charge, this includes books, stationary and learning materials.
Educational Institutes that fail to meet the standards shall be reviewed of their licensing and would not be allowed to recruit students and scholars wether its in the nation or abroad until they meet standards.
Companies are allowed to set up minimum education standards once reviewed and approved by the Government of Hammerstar
Hereby takes Clause 100, or Regula Rationalis, in motion.
I remembered posting this in the facts of my nation, and no one bats an eye. I thought it was acceptable, but when I posted this in my SCO accession thread, everyone lost their minds.
http://thesouthpacific.x10.mx/thread-2607.html
Almost every member scrutinised me due to this law, that's why i made a solo RP thread about the status of this law:
http://thesouthpacific.x10.mx/thread-2610.html
So, I came up with a better one. One that would get me out of the hook. I consulted with several people about it, and included their suggestions.
This is the new one
Clause 100, Protocol C
1.) Recognising the right for every citizen of Hammerstar to have a proper education, regardless of but not limited to: Gender, age, sexual preference, background, wealth, skin colour, cultural heritage, religion, health condition, bloodline and reputation.
2.) Enforcing that every resident in Hammerstar to take on the quest for knowledge, and is allowed to choose their own path of study.
3.) Effectuating that the residents of Hammerstar must complete at least secondary education until they are allowed to work.
3.a) Those who conduct work shall be thoroughly analysed of their bachelor diploma, and their understanding of the topic they have chosen. Failure of the governmental analysis would lead to the individual to complete a study refresher course. Refusing to rekindle their understanding of the topic they have devoted to would result in imprisonment for illegal employment
3.b) In special cases that the household could not support themselves (e.g: Unfortunate accidents, Financial loss, Death of a guardian, etc), The government of Hammerstar is obliged to help the citizens stand on their feet, and ensure that special steps be taken to provide them equal access to knowledge.
4.) Administering that every resident in Hammerstar is given full access on education with free of charge, paid by the government of Hammerstar. Learning materials such as books, shall be taken care for.
5.) Realising that some people would have a various financial difficulties in funding for their children's education, therefore, The government of Hammerstar shall provide all educational institutes with the state-of-the-art educational facilities with full funding from the government of Hammerstar, if the government deems that the educational institute has fulfilled certain criterions:
5.a) Meets the standards agreed in the annual education plans, in which educational standards are being placed in its highest stature
5.b) Produced various different researches and discoveries that are beneficial to the scientific advancements, welfare, and interests of Hammerstar
5.c) Has attained 98% total amount of graduates from the institute
5.d) Has attained 75% amount of high-honour academic standing graduates from the institute
5.e) Gives an opportunity for scholars to solve real life problems through internships and hands-on practices.
6.)Stating that Education shall henceforth be free of tuition and discrimination. Those who partake in discrimination shall be punished according to their respective educational institutes.
7.) Acknowledges the existence of disabled citizens, both mentally and physically, and ensures that special steps be taken to provide them equal access to knowledge.
8.) Acquiring all citizens to have a strong fluency and understand on the Latium, the national language of Hammerstar.
9.) Concedes to the fact that Hammerstar has various different cultures over the years, and that leaving them to rot is simply wasteful.
10.) Realising that the artistic values of Hammerstar has endured several threats that is known to have ended various different civilisations.
11.) Deeply concerns that the cultural heritages of Hammerstar are slowly coming to a point where it shall be evanescent.
12.) Holding the responsibility to completely embrace and conserve the cultural heritage of Hammerstar, therefore in the act of conservation, the government requires that all citizens practice at least one of the many traditional and cultural arts in Hammerstar.
13.) Admitting the fact that the art of combat has been a part of the cultural heritage in Hammerstar, its influence in history is simply ineffable.
14.) Professing that Hammerstar has a lagniappe in the art of combat, and that its effect to an individual is simply quintessential. Therefore the art of war and combat has, and always will be, a staple part of history.
15.) Therefore demanding that all citizens of Hammerstar to be adept at least one discipline of the martial arts, and choose at least one type of weaponry to master. Either it be a modern practice or a traditional practice.
16.) Elaborating that a test of proficiency shall be conducted in a decided battlefield/location where the disciple shall be rigorously examined by their educators and a couple of grandmasters through a series of criterions. A government official shall look over the grading process.
16.a) The government of Hammerstar implores that the final test shall be a test between two disciples of the art, which shall be paired up by the mentors overlooking the battle.
17.) Hereby takes clause 100, or the C protocol in motion.
Now Henn, Ryccia, Qvait and Farengeto are still cringing about it, but several other members have cried out stop, and accepted the fact that Hammerstar had actually renewed its law in favour of RP realism. Farengeto won't stop cringing about it, so I called him the following:
"Furthermore, to the delegate of Farangeto, it is my personal opinion that you have disrespected our sovereignty and have been unable to accept our ways of life, simply because that we are different. We have not yet known about your ways of life, we just got out from our isolation a couple months ago, we would not change our laws to stoop to your standards simply because that we are different. We truly hope monsieur delegate, that our relations shall be peaceful, no matter how different we are." He wasn't much help in solving this thing, and I, quite frankly, hated the very fact of him face palming and grouching instead of trying to help me out of this (Like some others).
Nevertheless, everyone accepted the fact that I actually took into consideration, the worries of other members. I quote Kris: "[…]for taking into consideration the opinion of this Council." Well that's the story, and I am currently the only nation in which their accession to the SCO took longer than anyone else.
TL;DR, you changed the law, basically making it the same but with different wording...?
Look at it again, analyse it carefully.
Exactly the same, but with very slightly lower standards and without fixing any of the actual problems?
(10-11-2015, 12:13 PM)Hammerstar Wrote: Well that's the story, and I am currently the only nation in which their accession to the SCO took longer than anyone else.
I'm just going to point out that yours wasn't the longest accession process. Mine lasted months
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I kept on remembering the first time I wrote the articles in La Rapière, its purely about Hammerstar. People actually like reading about it because they learnt something in RL knowledge.
The haze article and the valiant governor being imprisoned are articles that are a huge deal in the nation. I don't know why people think it to be irrelevant, because I'm reflecting this to what I see everyday in Indonesia. The good guys are being imprinted for something they didn't do (KPK), and the haze is poisoning almost everyone in Indonesia (Haze in Kalimantan and Riau)
The way I see it, it's a big deal, it isn't irrelevant because the effects Hammerstar gets from these issues are what the effects are happening to Indonesia from the crisis it currently experiences. It just makes me sad when people say that the articles I wrote is how do you say it rhino?
"So, this is what I think. There is quite a lot of nonsense. There is quite a lot of extrapolation. There is almost no information I really care about. "
The sole goals of my RP is to provide you with the beauties of my culture, Hammerstarian, islamic and Indonesian culture. Where John Lennon's, Marin Luther King Jr.'s, and many other noted anarcho-pacisits "dream" comes true. Because you guys all talk about war, and complain in RL that there's too much war.
No one is quite interested in beautifying the flowers that bloom in your garden, instead you would go on to someone else's garden and complain how shitty they are.
That's why it makes me hurt when you guys get in here and ramble about the unrealistic and how irrelevant these news pieces are. Because fyi, some of the articles is what I'm witnessing and experiencing in Real life.
So I'm giving the readers two options
1. La Rapière would be a newspaper that gives out the national happenings of the nation, and would be the primary method of me flaunting my culture.
2. Become like a rip-off of Treasure Island Newspaper, and only report on the things that happen in RP, the ones that would actually be, to respond what Rhino have said: "The info people actually care about."
Bottom line, I just want to let you know how much the time have changed for nation Roleplay. From reporting culture = interest, to reporting culture = irrelevance.
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(10-11-2015, 02:16 PM)Hammerstar Wrote: I kept on remembering the first time I wrote the articles in La Rapière, its purely about Hammerstar. People actually like reading about it because they learnt something in RL knowledge.
The haze article and the valiant governor being imprisoned are articles that are a huge deal in the nation. I don't know why people think it to be irrelevant, because I'm reflecting this to what I see everyday in Indonesia. The good guys are being imprinted for something they didn't do (KPK), and the haze is poisoning almost everyone in Indonesia (Haze in Kalimantan and Riau)
The way I see it, it's a big deal, it isn't irrelevant because the effects Hammerstar gets from these issues are what the effects are happening to Indonesia from the crisis it currently experiences. It just makes me sad when people say that the articles I wrote is how do you say it rhino?
"So, this is what I think. There is quite a lot of nonsense. There is quite a lot of extrapolation. There is almost no information I really care about. "
The sole goals of my RP is to provide you with the beauties of my culture, Hammerstarian, islamic and Indonesian culture. Where John Lennon's, Marin Luther King Jr.'s, and many other noted anarcho-pacisits "dream" comes true. Because you guys all talk about war, and complain in RL that there's too much war.
No one is quite interested in beautifying the flowers that bloom in your garden, instead you would go on to someone else's garden and complain how shitty they are.
That's why it makes me hurt when you guys get in here and ramble about the unrealistic and how irrelevant these news pieces are. Because fyi, some of the articles is what I'm witnessing and experiencing in Real life.
So I'm giving the readers two options
1. La Rapière would be a newspaper that gives out the national happenings of the nation, and would be the primary method of me flaunting my culture.
2. Become like a rip-off of Treasure Island Newspaper, and only report on the things that happen in RP, the ones that would actually be, to respond what Rhino have said: "The info people actually care about."
Bottom line, I just want to let you know how much the time have changed for nation Roleplay. From reporting culture = interest, to reporting culture = irrelevance. Our problem isn't that your presenting it, it's what. you're presenting. Most of what your articles come across as preventing a perfect, infalliable utopia thag is unambiguously better than everyone while mocking any attempts at realism.
It's not perfect, but its harmonious. That's all.
The comments I've received lately just shows that making attempts of making a great story is simply worthless
For example, about Neo-Steamlannde, I never expected them to be real, it was an inspiration I drew out from years of reading Steampunk and diesel punk adventure novels. I mean, I read 2000 leagues under the sea, I know that not a single ounce of the things Verne wrote is real, but hey, it's a good story.
That's what I wanted to do, I want to tell a good story. i am a novelist after all, the gift I kept on making is the stories of a nation when intolerance exist in minimum. Where it is a product of many leaders like Gandhi, Malcolm X, Martin Luther King Jr, Prophet Muhammad, Nelson Mandela, Pope Francis, Chaplin, Lennon, Shakespeare, and all these people who had a vision of a state of harmony and peace. When it abhors the ideas of violence and bloodlust, but kept on honing its skills to defend the rights and peace of man.
In short, I'm a storyteller, and the things that I wrote exist solely in creating a good story.
"毎日の小さな努力の積み重ねが歴史を作っていくんだよ。"
Put a little effort everyday and it will stack up and create a foundation for you.
- Doraemon
Treasure Island Awards Best Roleplay 2020
Treasure Island Awards Best Roleplayer 2020
Cocos Winner for Best Character Writer 2017
Cocos Winner for Best International Event 2017
Cocos Winner for Best Overall RP 2017
Things to know: Medical Intern and Biomedical Scientist from Indonesia, Muslim, 188 metres tall, loves trains
The problem you have is the universe you're basing these stories in. If you can make clear that your stories are not influencing the rest of MTRP, then your stories are fine. Otherwise, the Logic Police will bang on your door.
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